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The Melting Sun

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The sun is a symbol of clarity and wisdom, when it disapears, the tie between reality and dreams disappears as well.

Entry to Creativity is Cool contest held by #Traditional-Artists

Contest stock:
:bulletwhite:In the Dark6 by `faestock
:bulletwhite:These Wild Woods 8 by ^Elandria
:bulletwhite:Silent Music by ^Elandria
:bulletwhite:Devils in the Details 06 by ^Elandria

Other stock:
:bulletwhite:Girl in pink dress stock 2 by ~A68Stock

Pencils, pens, acrylic on paper.

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3286x2326px 11.84 MB
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

This is a truly amazing piece!

The colours are strong, powerful and beautiful. You have a great mix of fresh colours and they are spread over the canvas is a very pleasing way. It makes me want to look at it for a long time simply to observe them all. When I was looking through my messages, I had to stop when I saw this, because it was such an eye pleaser.

It's also a very original piece. It's the kind of work you have to analyse, and everyone will have their own view on the meaning. I love those kinds of pieces, and I always feel inspired by looking at them.

I've given you a lower rating on "technique" because it's not over realistic in a lot of places. I do realise that it might have been your intention, but I still feel it takes away from the impact. The trees look a bit cartoony, and you've used a lot of outlines. I think that more realism would have made the piece even better. Also i think you could have spent some more time on colouring certain parts, such as the ground next to the door.

Over all it's an amazing piece that I would be proud to have on my wall! I love the colours, creativity and artistic feel of the piece!